“Coka Cola, The Refreshing Feeling in One Sip.” This beverage is world- wide known and it is loved by all our consumers. Coka Cola was first manufactured in 1974. As soon as it was available in the market, it was a hit. Everyone bought it, from school- aged kids to grandparents. This is the first beverage that is an energy drink with some fizz. Our company has made over a million dollars on this drink. Coka Cola is served in vending machines, retail stores, schools, offices, and even at restaurants. It is the perfect drink for all, whether you want an energy drink or something to keep your thirst away. This beverage also helps out consumers’ bodies in many ways. The money we get when Coka Cola is purchased by our significant consumers is used for donations, so not only does Coka Cola benefit our company, but it also benefits others. Unlike other brands, Coka Cola is healthy, so do not worry about anything while drinking this it. All you have to do is drink Coka Cola and enjoy its refreshing feeling. As you may already know, Coka Cola has many consumers. But, to catch the eye of the public a little more, we would like you to air our commercial on you television channel.
Coka Cola is the perfect rink for everyone. It comes in nine different flavors: orange, lime, cherry, lemon, mango, strawberry, pink lemonade, pina colada, and lemonade. We also have a super flavor, vanilla with root beer. This flavor is rare, but consumers will find it easily if it is available. Coka Cola also comes in different sizes. It comes in cans and bottles. On a daily basis, one billion cans of Coka Cola are drunk by people all around the world. No other brands have these many consumers and drinkers. With all these flavors, sizes, and consumers, Coka is the ultimate soft drink.
Many of us think that the things we drink or eat to make ourselves and our body’s good do not taste delicious. Well, Coka Cola not only has amazing flavors, but it helps you and your body. It includes fluoride, which is good for your teeth. It keeps them white, so that when you smile, they will look bright. Coka Cola is also an energy drink. Many of our healthy athletes drink it, like Alex Rodriguez, for energy and refreshment. Coka Cola also helps to remove bad breath. Gum is something that can also remove bad breath, but it damages your teeth with its high sugar count. Coka, however, helps you teeth by removing bad breath. It is the only and best soft drink good for you body.
Many Soft drinks are unhealthy in many different ways and many think that Coka Cola is one of them. But, Coka Cola is definitely not unhealthy compared to the other brands. It has on 90 calories as opposed to 100 in the other brands. Coka Cola is also caffeine free. Caffeine is bad for you because it makes you high and hyper. Soft drinks with fizz usually use caffeine to make the fizz. But, our company uses our own healthy, natural ingredients to make the best fizz, energizing soft drink. Coka Cola has only 10% of sugar. In today’s world, many people eat a lot of sugar and damage their bodies. Eating a lot of sugar is not the only thing that damages you body by what you eat or drink. There are plenty more things. So, to help people live better and healthier lives, our company has made sure our product, Coka Cola, was capable of doing that.
Our company is not the only thing that benefits from Coka Cola’s purchases, others do too. In March 2011, there was an earthquake and a tsunami in Japan. In these natural disasters, there were over 7,417 victims. Japan was completely ruined and what was not ruined is now damages. To help countries and people, like Japan, our company has decided that 10% of our proceeds will be donated to charity. We strive on helping people who need it the best way we can. We believe that helping others is the right thing to do in times like this.
The Coka Cola commercial is the perfect commercial for your channel to air. Coka Cola is a very unique drink; different from all the other soft drinks. It has different flavors and it comes in different sizes. It is also the most popular and #1 in the United States and England. Not only is Coka Cola delicious, but it also but it also helps your body. By airing our commercial, people will start buying Coka Cola, a healthy drink. This way our consumers will live a better and healthier life. Also, the money we make when our consumers buy Coka Cola, not only does it benefit our company, but it also benefits others. Our company believes that helping others is very important. When people see our commercial on your channel, they will buy Coka Cola. With the money we make, we will donate it. It is very evident that you should air our Coka Cola commercial on your channel. The greatest commercial on the greatest channel.
Hi! Krutika. I am amazed by not only the length of your proposal but the quality and effort you put in to make it seem like you are actually presenting this to a company.I reaaly like the way you support all your points with little facts and big words.Im sure if it was a real board room, the company would definitly be partners with Coca-Cola. Just watch out for minor grammar mistakes like: "Coka,however,"
ReplyDeleteOverall, excellent job! I lok foward for your future post.
I really love your motto!
Thanks for this wonderful comment. I will watch out for the minor mistakes. I like my motto, too and I am happy you do ,too.
ReplyDeleteHey Krutika! Nice essay. I an so amazed about your quality of you paragraph. Not only that but it is very lengthy. As i was reading i sow only some spelling errors but overall good job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Krutika! Your essay was very persuasive. My dentist says that coke can stain your teeth although your essay was so persuasive that i am willing to start drinking coke. Next time check your spelling before you post. Overall, great job.
ReplyDeletehello krutika once again this ironic baecause in my comment im telling you not to have spelling mistakes when i spelled two wrong my self!!!haha
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